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Here Is Your Revised Display Ad:

Dear Friend,

As I promised, here is a copy of the revised display ad we worked on.

If you remember, here is the original ad we used for the headline contest -- you can even print out a copy of it, right here:

http://www.kingofcopy.com/tips/real_estate_ad_071505.html

And here is the revised ad.

I've used Frank Edwards headline, because he actually sent in a few good ones. Reality is, you'd want to run a split-test between several headlines to try and establish a "control" piece.

You can download a copy of this ad if you click on it as well:

Hope you learned something from this exercise. I'll have one final comment about it tomorow.

Now go sell something,

Craig Garber

P.S. Want a fast and easy way to get your display ad written, lickety-split? Ask me here: www.KingOfCopy.com/salescopyreview

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